Beauty In Black and White

I like this piece of work a lot. You have chosen a very beautiful reference with a great pose for your work.

You are definitely good with pencil, your shading is good and also very realistic.

I think what you had problems with a little is the anatomy (also together with the light). For one there is the part of the leg, where the upper leg builds a triangle, which you left as very much light, but it is too much, you need to add a part of the upper leg on its underside, as well as of the under leg. If you look at it you might notice, it gets very small at some parts. You could also do a little more shading on the under side of the under leg I think.

The other thing is the arm, it is also very thin, look at your model again and compare and you will probably see it too <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />.

But the main body part is done really well, also with the folds, I have heard it is quite difficult to do those!